Comments on: The Backstory http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/ Share your sexual experiences with us, as we share with you Thu, 04 Dec 2008 01:21:38 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.3 by: Daisy Maile http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-39850 Thu, 19 Jun 2008 15:48:54 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-39850 You have written a beautiful, moving, slightly frightening piece here. I say there's a bit of fear because you make the sex the character has with Guy so compelling and powerful, and the words you chose to write the sex scene with Elle are just not as interesting. So, I felt some fear for her heart being broken. Mostly though, I had this strong sea-swell tug in my groin area and wished, as I have now and then, that I could experience life with a penis! You have written a beautiful, moving, slightly frightening piece here. I say there’s a bit of fear because you make the sex the character has with Guy so compelling and powerful, and the words you chose to write the sex scene with Elle are just not as interesting. So, I felt some fear for her heart being broken.

Mostly though, I had this strong sea-swell tug in my groin area and wished, as I have now and then, that I could experience life with a penis!

]]> by: Camilla http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-16648 Tue, 19 Jun 2007 19:11:22 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-16648 What a wonderful story. When I was a bit younger, I wanted the exact same thing, to watch my guy with another guy. And then to satisfy my man afterwards. What a wonderful story. When I was a bit younger, I wanted the exact same thing, to watch my guy with another guy. And then to satisfy my man afterwards.

]]> by: Anna http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-11049 Fri, 27 Apr 2007 05:49:28 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-11049 Exquisite. Gorgeous writing. Publish a novel someday. Please, I beg you. Exquisite. Gorgeous writing.

Publish a novel someday. Please, I beg you.

]]> by: Coconut http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-10265 Tue, 10 Apr 2007 21:56:39 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-10265 Haha! You're good enough to publish a book of these if you haven't already! Haha! You’re good enough to publish a book of these if you haven’t already!

]]> by: Sex Story Brad http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-10130 Sat, 07 Apr 2007 09:04:10 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-10130 Great story. I wish i could write like that. Keep them coming :) Great story. I wish i could write like that. Keep them coming :)

]]> by: special http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-9511 Sat, 24 Mar 2007 20:31:07 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-9511 :wink: i would not be able to stay in the closet,,, i wanna join,,, great story,, (( where is my vib )) ,,,, 0;-) :wink: i would not be able to stay in the closet,,, i wanna join,,, great story,, (( where is my vib )) ,,,, 0;-)

]]> by: max http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-8157 Tue, 06 Mar 2007 18:41:10 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-8157 spectacularly good. ooooh, i'm there spectacularly good. ooooh, i’m there

]]> by: str1pp http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-7105 Thu, 15 Feb 2007 23:52:19 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-7105 :mrgreen:I seriously think that's the best piece of erotic literature I've ever read. Maybe even the best short story I've ever read. Skills, all the way. :mrgreen: I seriously think that’s the best piece of erotic literature I’ve ever read. Maybe even the best short story I’ve ever read. Skills, all the way.

]]> by: slamaina http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-6503 Tue, 06 Feb 2007 16:05:37 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-6503 Hot. Well written. More Please. Hot. Well written. More Please.

]]> by: SinCityTigger http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-5184 Thu, 04 Jan 2007 04:16:39 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-5184 Absolutely incredible story. Very visual. Very descriptive. waiting to read what you say for an encore, Tig Absolutely incredible story. Very visual. Very descriptive.

waiting to read what you say for an encore,

Tig

]]> by: sweat shop sissy http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-4467 Sun, 03 Dec 2006 11:45:51 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-4467 that was wonderful . thank you. isn't it fun to write from the other sexes pov? i've written a few things with a woman's voice and love it. if you were in the neighbourhood and stopped by and read "in search of the inner lesbian" or 'lap of luxury" i would be thrilled. cheers sss that was wonderful .
thank you.
isn’t it fun to write from the other sexes pov? i’ve written a few things with a woman’s voice and love it.
if you were in the neighbourhood and stopped by and read “in search of the inner lesbian” or ‘lap of luxury” i would be thrilled.
cheers
sss

]]> by: introspectre http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-3931 Tue, 14 Nov 2006 17:12:17 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-3931 As always, fucking brilliant my dear. But this: "I could hear her begin to keen, that low mongrel-song that announced her coming. Her fingers dug into my ass with her urgency; she was below me, but she was fucking me, her hips bucking, hungry below me. “Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me, fuck me,” Elle intoned aimlessly in my ear, and so I did. She opened around me, she flowered, she flowed, she burst and she sang a long string of meaningless vowels into the echoing hallway. And in her song, I joined, letting loose as I could with someone I knew, someone I loved, someone who was different from me, but someone with whom I could share so much." That is poetry in it's purest and finest. If I had a cock, I would salute you with it. Instead, I'm stuck with mere adoring your pants off. (wink) As always, fucking brilliant my dear.

But this:
“I could hear her begin to keen, that low mongrel-song that announced her coming. Her fingers dug into my ass with her urgency; she was below me, but she was fucking me, her hips bucking, hungry below me.

“Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me, fuck me,” Elle intoned aimlessly in my ear, and so I did. She opened around me, she flowered, she flowed, she burst and she sang a long string of meaningless vowels into the echoing hallway.

And in her song, I joined, letting loose as I could with someone I knew, someone I loved, someone who was different from me, but someone with whom I could share so much.”

That is poetry in it’s purest and finest. If I had a cock, I would salute you with it.
Instead, I’m stuck with mere adoring your pants off. (wink)

]]> by: freddy http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-3913 Mon, 13 Nov 2006 16:30:42 +0000 http://www.tellyoursexstory.com/blog/the-backstory/#comment-3913 WOW! I'm just taking tentative steps in that direction so that was exceptionally hot! And written so well. And yes please, I'd like to be next. May I bring my lover too? WOW! I’m just taking tentative steps in that direction so that was exceptionally hot! And written so well. And yes please, I’d like to be next. May I bring my lover too?

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